Thursday, October 18, 2012

"Moments"


I read and answered something on Twitter yesterday and I’m going to share it here.

Q. “Writers, do you know how to create "moments" so you don't bore your readers?”

A.  Meaning? “The Tamanawis spirit waits like a black leopard on the highest plateau of the Neah Bay village. Throbbing beats pulsate in its throat in anticipation for a victim to call upon its name. Tamanawis lingers and glances ever so slyly toward the village ready to pounce: like a scorpion’s tail would strike, filling its unfortunate target with poison.

I think that is what the writer meant! What do you think? Is my ANSWER written as a moment?
~Dawn~

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